Friday, 24 March 2017

Animals at War



This past week we have finished our disaster topic and started an ANZAC day topic. We have 4 mini topics which are Animals at War, Military Hospitals, Front Line and Life at Home. This is my first finished presentation and I am working on Front Line now. This is about which animals went and how many horses went to war.
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  1. Anonymous20 June 2017 at 14:39

    Kia ora Holly,
    My name is Caitlyn, I am a year 7 student at karoro school. I think you did a good job on animals at war. I haven’t thought about that subject before? I don’t think it is fair that all of those animals died.

    I like your writing about animals at war. It is quite a interesting topic to look into. Your paragraphs had lots of information about the transport. I also liked how you write the question that you were answering on each slide.

    Next time I think you should put some more full stops and commas in your work, because you can’t stop very often. Also I can’t really read your writing because it is in the wrong font and the colour should be a darker colour.

    I really liked your writing about animals in war. At school we did some things about war, but we didn’t do that topic. I didn’t realise that some many horses and donkeys died. How long did it take you to finish this work?

    I really liked your writing it was really interesting and you have good reasons. If you have any spare time can you please visit my blog: http://karorocaitlynh.blogspot.co.nz/

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