Friday 24 March 2017
Animals at War
This past week we have finished our disaster topic and started an ANZAC day topic. We have 4 mini topics which are Animals at War, Military Hospitals, Front Line and Life at Home. This is my first finished presentation and I am working on Front Line now. This is about which animals went and how many horses went to war.
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Kia ora Holly. I really like your work, my favourite bit is your comic strip. How long did it take you to make and finish your slide? Bye for now Emma
ReplyDeleteKia ora Holly,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Caitlyn, I am a year 7 student at karoro school. I think you did a good job on animals at war. I haven’t thought about that subject before? I don’t think it is fair that all of those animals died.
I like your writing about animals at war. It is quite a interesting topic to look into. Your paragraphs had lots of information about the transport. I also liked how you write the question that you were answering on each slide.
Next time I think you should put some more full stops and commas in your work, because you can’t stop very often. Also I can’t really read your writing because it is in the wrong font and the colour should be a darker colour.
I really liked your writing about animals in war. At school we did some things about war, but we didn’t do that topic. I didn’t realise that some many horses and donkeys died. How long did it take you to finish this work?
I really liked your writing it was really interesting and you have good reasons. If you have any spare time can you please visit my blog: http://karorocaitlynh.blogspot.co.nz/